Right so, reviews came back for Paperbag and for some obvious reasons it sucked. Length was the major issue, combine with no plot. Seems to be a regular issue with me - no plot line. So I am working on it with my next submission. It is to be a game, and this time will have some sort of plot line -- as per usual it's going to be the result of experimentations with Action Script as I am still plodding around the syntax trying to learn about its little tweaks, though I get more comfortable on a daily basis and with any luck will be producing some sleek things in the future (though the animations may be sub par, the scripting underneath will be well done :P).